My current LinkedIn About blurs into the crowd—too long, a bit dated, and nowhere near the polished first-impression I give in person. I want a concise, friendly narrative that still signals credibility to recruiters and partners in the finance space. Think approachable, human, and keyword-smart, with an undercurrent of leadership that reflects my role as a Manager. Here’s the assignment: • Rewrite my existing summary into a tight 150–250-word story. Keep the tone warm yet professional, weave in finance-industry terms naturally, and let my leadership style shine without listing every achievement. • After the core About text, suggest lightweight tweaks to headline wording, skills list, and basic formatting so the profile flows end-to-end. To help me pick quickly, please include: 1. A brief outline of your process (research, draft, refine). 2. One or two sample sentences that show the voice you’d use. 3. Your turnaround time from kickoff to final copy (I’m aiming for fast, ideally within 48 hours). No need for a full resume overhaul—just this targeted polish. If your sample strikes the right balance of warmth and authority, we can start immediately.