I have several technology-focused texts that need to be reshaped so they speak clearly and persuasively to an adult, professional audience. The core information is sound; what I need is a refined voice that feels at home in board-room briefings, stakeholder decks, white-paper intros, and similar business contexts. Your task is to take the existing copy I provide, preserve its technical accuracy, and adjust language, structure, and tone so it resonates with decision-makers and other tech-savvy professionals. All jargon should remain meaningful, but fluff and ambiguity must disappear. When data or feature descriptions can be expressed more succinctly, do so. When an example would anchor a concept for a C-suite reader, weave it in naturally. Deliverables • Adapted text returned in clean, track-changes-enabled Word files (or Google Docs, if you prefer) • A short rationale (2–3 sentences) for any substantial re-ordering or removal of sections Acceptance criteria • Readability score suitable for educated adults (Flesch 50–60 target) • No loss of technical accuracy or key facts • Tone fits professional/business settings within the technology sector I’ll share the source documents once we start; most run 400–600 words. Turnaround within three days of receipt is ideal.