I’ve just wrapped the final draft of a 65,000-word memoir and I’m ready for an outside eye. I’d like you to read the manuscript start to finish and share candid, constructive feedback that will help me tighten the narrative before I move on to line editing. While I’m especially curious about how the overall structure flows and whether the voice stays engaging, feel free to comment on anything that stands out—pacing, scene choices, emotional resonance, or moments that felt confusing or slow. The more specific your observations, the better. Preferred workflow • I’ll supply a Word document. Please leave in-line comments using Track Changes and add a brief summary at the end of each chapter (a sentence or two is fine) so I can see your running impressions. • After finishing, include a short overview letter highlighting strengths, recurring issues, and actionable suggestions. A two-week turnaround would be ideal, but let me know if you need a bit more time. Experience with memoirs—or at least narrative non-fiction—is a plus, yet I’m open to anyone who can read with care and honesty.